Saturday, 9 May 2009

This one means a lot to me

Lost at sea, embracing waves.
Safe and warm, calmy drowning.
Beginning of a fall, illuminating
Too dangerous

Loud noise of air and
The photograph that was.
And in one perfect night,
Fragility overtook
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2 comments:

  1. starbrained10 May 2009 at 08:55

    I like this one a lot

    Oh and um I REALLY don't like Ted Hughes

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  2. Lee18 June 2009 at 00:25

    This reminds me of "Just Like Heaven" by The Cure... The drowing in the ocean part of that song. Anyway, beautiful poetry, you have a lot of talent.

    -MacTheMouth from TV

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